Slice of Life Day 4: Rust to Grey

6 thoughts on “Slice of Life Day 4: Rust to Grey”

  1. At the start, I expected this poem to be about the natural beauty but it became so much more complex when it led to the deaths of the children. My emotions crumbled at the thought of those lost children. Beautifully written.

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