Slice of Life: Day 6

2 thoughts on “Slice of Life: Day 6”

  1. Love how you built tension. The sweat, the muscle twitch. Nice simile with the heron. I think you have the beginnings of a strong novelist……just need about 200 more pages and a one year sabbatical!

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